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[Edited by Nick Rockliffe on 09-03-2008 23:13 PM][Edited by Nick Rockliffe on 09-03-2008 23:14 PM] Say what
There were some nice sounds of the hoover but to be honest that's about as much as i can say about this track. The Kick was way to high in the mix and just sounded out of place and over powering.
The track just stayed on one level, had next to no variation and no drive to it.
Fuck On Cocain001
Ok, this one was a little better, a nice bassline which had a groove but again lacked the same as the last one. Little to know variation and just went on with out devolopment.
Advanced001
Probably the best produced of the 3, had several layers to it's arrangement but goes all wrong when its drop's @ 3:45ish. That lead riff comes from no where and does not fit in with the track or where it seemed to be going.
With all the respect in the world you could tell the 3 tracks where done in 1 weekend.
Judging by the tracks, i may be wrong but sounds like your new to producing.
Overall you have some nice ideas and some nice sounds. You just need to think a little bit more about the tracks and work on arrangement and what builds a track.
A little but more thought and some work on the technical sides of producing im sure you can develop your tracks to a higher level as i have said there were some good ideas in them ![Thumbs up](/images/smiles/thumb.gif)
winner of the 2008 failed promoter award goes to Juice for being shut down within 2 and half hours of their first night.
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