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DJBARRY
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I finished these tunes at the weekend.
These are my first 3 tunes and still need to take them into studio to give them a more professional feel and add a few effects and builds but wanted some feed back....

Thanks

Barry


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DJBARRY wrote on 09-03-2008 10:10 PM

I finished these tunes at the weekend.
These are my first 3 tunes and still need to take them into studio to give them a more professional feel and add a few effects and builds but wanted some feed back....

Thanks

Barry


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winner of the 2008 failed promoter award goes to Juice for being shut down within 2 and half hours of their first night.

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[Edited by Nick Rockliffe on 09-03-2008 23:13 PM]

[Edited by Nick Rockliffe on 09-03-2008 23:14 PM]

Say what

There were some nice sounds of the hoover but to be honest that's about as much as i can say about this track. The Kick was way to high in the mix and just sounded out of place and over powering.

The track just stayed on one level, had next to no variation and no drive to it.

Fuck On Cocain001

Ok, this one was a little better, a nice bassline which had a groove but again lacked the same as the last one. Little to know variation and just went on with out devolopment.

Advanced001

Probably the best produced of the 3, had several layers to it's arrangement but goes all wrong when its drop's @ 3:45ish. That lead riff comes from no where and does not fit in with the track or where it seemed to be going.

With all the respect in the world you could tell the 3 tracks where done in 1 weekend.

Judging by the tracks, i may be wrong but sounds like your new to producing.

Overall you have some nice ideas and some nice sounds. You just need to think a little bit more about the tracks and work on arrangement and what builds a track.

A little but more thought and some work on the technical sides of producing im sure you can develop your tracks to a higher level as i have said there were some good ideas in them Thumbs up

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Feedback much appreciated.
Ye im new to producing and have limited software and gear, so thought id give it a go and take some feedback and keek trying ...

Will take your advise and keep at it....

Thanks mate
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DJBARRY wrote on 09-03-2008 11:27 PM

Feedback much appreciated.
Ye im new to producing and have limited software and gear, so thought id give it a go and take some feedback and keek trying ...

Will take your advise and keep at it....

Thanks mate
Barry



Good stuff dude;

what sequencer are you using out of interest?

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DJBARRY
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Nick Rockliffe wrote on 09-03-2008 11:28 PM

Good stuff dude;

what sequencer are you using out of interest?



I used ableton as a programme, thats it...

All samples are from a cd or taken off my records...

No effects, outboard gear or any added extras, kinda a cut and paste remix & or tune.
Just wanted to get something down before i spent hours learning software...

Am in process of getting fruity loops and learning it...




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Just wanted to say thanks for the feedback some of you pm'd me with...

All taken on board and look forward to using the ideas ...

Baz


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